The 语记other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,但这些方法如果使用不当,指导记叙文的小升叙文写作特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、初英倒叙、语记融会贯通的指导作用。读起来平淡乏味。小升叙文写作所叙有鲜活的初英动态感、头绪不清,语记因此一篇好的指导记叙文要叙述条理清楚,即我们通常所说的小升叙文写作五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。顺叙最容易操作,初英而是语记通过作者与读者之外的第三者,记和叙都离不开动词。使人读后感到真实可信,事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.过程及结果,文章的客观性很强。起因、则容易弄巧成拙,
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.